A comic page by me. Thoughts please!

seb_pinter

Hi everyone, I've not attempted many sequential pages in my life time, but I'm working on this community comic project (mostly plotting and scripting), and I thought I'd turn my hand to drawing one of the pages, and I'd appreciate another thoughts or constructive critisms!
Thanks, Seb

Caliban

Can't see the image, Seb?

seb_pinter

any better? I was using Chrome, and I could see it fine, tried viewing it in Firefox and had nothing! Hopefully I've fixed it!

Caliban

Yup, there it is
Like it, especially the detail on panel 2

John_Steed

Awesome. Makes me want to see more of the story.

sandman

I really like the last panel. Very cool to have the big guy's punch and the guy ducking break the panel boarders. And having the lizard guy being punched in the foreground of the page makes this a really neat page.

seb_pinter

Thanks guys... appreciate the kind words. @Sandman, I'm really pleased with that last panel and the way the characters break the borders, glad you like it (and that you noticed!).

The first five pages of the story (of which this is page 4) will be going up soon, so I'll post a link when they do. Each page is by a different artist, all at different levels and different styles. I'm looking forward to seeing how people like it!

dubbat138

I like the line work. And the facial expressions.